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And I am
out to swim -
dark water,
no sand in sight,

and I am
a heavy thing
with my
ballooon heart

holding me
high, I am
not in
the cold

because I know
there is
always a way
ahead and out.
This was a poetry doodle in my journal, but I was told that it needed to be a deviation instead. I have made it so.
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silvernium Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
A doodle in your journal? Save EVERYTHING. Even the not-so-good (not talking about this one, just in general) as I was saying, even the not-so-good show where we have been, and it is quite interesting when balanced with the brilliant. Speaking of brilliant, I still look for leopards and it is all your fault.
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gedwaylem Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2009
beautifully said
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neonxaos Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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padme-naberrie Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2009
:heart: Love it!
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neonxaos Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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