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Winter does a thing to you, makes a thing of you,
shells you from the worldly smells and pulls you under
heavy blankets of dark and snow.

Nothing is as real
as the dreams you cut your sun-shaped holes in
when the light is out.

Let's sleep together, everyone.
By the fire, by moon.
Let's sleep together.
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avfc4me Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012
And THAT is why winter is my favorite time of year!

I like this particularly. Think I'll print it an' stick it above my desk and when I'm in need of distraction from work I'll glance over an' re-read it 'til I know it without peeking.
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neonxaos Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, you're welcome to do that :)
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BelaRoseWolf Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Student Writer
Well, this is kind-of haunting, but very interesting. I love how short and "sweet" it is. Excellent work!
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neonxaos Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, I prefer my poetry to be rather short and terse and my articles to be so long and sprawling that my editor goes insane :)
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BelaRoseWolf Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Student Writer
You're welcome! XD
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Bark Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Professional Writer
I've been thinking a lot lately about this same thing, but haven't been able to express it. Thanks.
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neonxaos Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're more than welcome :)
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